Tuesday, June 3, 2008

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Black star unseen
Shines black, not bright
But only when all thats left
Is light

2 comments:

Darcy said...

I REALLY like the idea of a black star.

Do you know anyone who is really passionate about rhyming poetry? Because I'm starting to wonder if I am not the best person to get critique from since I tend to like free-verse poetry (and that's all I write. odd coincidence. :P )

Alyssa said...

yeah by the way, I like this. It's short, and quirky, and after all, who really stops to think about stars shining when they're gone? Really. It's sweet. :)